Exploring the world, one voice at a time.
whalesong’s bow
displacement weight
longing
©2019 by Ron Scully
Ron Scully is a professionally retired bookseller.His first two chapbooks,Listening for 13 Blackbirds, and Darlington Braves will be published in the spring 2019. He has given up on being the Yale Younger Poet and Wimbledon, in exchange for counting snow, relearning the landscape, advising the world how he might see it. Nice time of life.
I like the line “displacement weight” The sparseness of words makes the hugeness of the whale more powerful .
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Thanks so much for your feedback, Ann!
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I like the line “displacement weight” sparseness of words is powerful.
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